REFLECTION
TASK 1A
AT MY GRADUATION CEREMONY :)
I'M A GALATASARAY FAN!!
WTIH MY FRIENDS, I LOVE THEM :*
WITH MY BESTIE; CENNET :D
ART
ROCK'N ROLL BABY!
BE AWESOME NOT SAD :D
Hey guys! I am Evrim, I am
a student at METU and my deparment is “Foreign Language Education”. I love
learning languages so my second foreign language is French. I lived in Antalya
so far and I love that city so much especially it’s climate, because Ankara’s
climate is so cold for me J My family still live in Antalya and I
miss them, I have got a little brother and I get along with him; we played
computer games together and I miss that times. I was graduated from “Aksu
Anatolian Teacher Training High School”. I love my high school and my friends,
now I am the same department with one of my best friends whose name is Cennet, but
I wish I was the same university with my other best friends. I think I am
friendly, cheerful, social, stubboorn, curious and the most modest person you
have ever met! If you ask something to my friends about me they will explain
what a wonderful person I am. I have a lot of hobbies that I really enjoy, for
example I like swimming, reading book, watching film, learning new things etc.
I am interested in football, basketball, literature, music and technology. I am
a big fan of Galatasaray F.C and I also support Real Madrid F.C in Europe, I
think both of them are the best team in their league. My favorite footballer is
Cristiano Ronaldo who has won the Ballon D’or twice. My favorite authors are
Amin Maalouf, George Orwell, Yaşar Kemal and Murathan Mungan. I love poetry too
and my favorite poet is Omar Khayyam, I want to learn Persian to read Khayyam’s
poets in his mother tongue. I listen every kind of music except rap but my
favorite is rock music and my favorite band is Green Day, I think their best
song is “Boulevard of Broken Dreams.” To sum up I love living and I think
everything has a beauty so look around more careful because there is always new
things to discover.
EVRİM
ÖNDER
I literally "love" your text. It is so entertaining and unique. You wrote almost every interest of yoursnand every kind of way of yourself. You also put some sayings which I really like and it is impressive that you live by them. I found some tense mistakes, missing suffixes and wrong prepositions after reading twice. But I almost did not realize them because the text was so fluent that I could not stop till the end.
YanıtlaSilDear Evrim,
YanıtlaSilYou have a few grammar mistakes but you have a funny language and this makes your writing very sincere.It provided me to know about you very much and I liked it.
I love that you are a huge fan of Galatasaray and this task is really helpful to know you I hope you pursue your dreams and learn Persian, it is such a beautiful language. I realized some grammatical mistakes as Esra and Elif mentioned. Here are some of them
YanıtlaSil''My family still LIVES''
Stubborn*
I am in* the same department